Hey, it’s Sunday.
You’re either pretending to take a break or staring at your analytics like they owe you money.
So let’s do something useful:
Drop your landing page, link or screenshot, doesn’t matter.
I will break down what’s wrong, what might save it, and maybe even throw a meme in there. And if it’s somehow good, I’ll say that too.
Let’s clean the mess.
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Not enough sections to tell user about your product.
You started showing me testimonials soon after hero without telling me what it exactly offers and who it is for. Shift the key features at second section and testimonials to 4 or 5th.
Headline in Hero Is dead...
Testimonials? Do u think someone would believe these testimonials, specifically the audience for whom it is built, they are gonna leave your site as soon as they see ur testimonials... Get some early testers and put real reviews. Founders, makers (ur target audience) knows everything, they are into this day and night, and they are not gonna convinced at all.
Footer CTA also need revamp.
In conclusion, your page is not built for your target audience yet, no, nada.
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Here is the landing page for my app:
https://www.eazleai.com/
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Your Tagline is little generic, didnt caught me when I landed. Ideation, is a vague word, Not everyone connects with it immediately.
No pain point covered in hero. It doesn’t hit why someone needs this.
The purple color isn't bad, but personally, it didn’t feel super appealing to me. (Just a subjective take.)
Instead of a static image, consider adding a short demo video, even a 30-sec walkthrough can really help users get what the platform is about.
When I scroll not a single section is in my viewport, when i start watching or reading a section, I had to scroll down to have a full view of what u want to show. Ideally, each section should fit well within the screen without the need for extra scrolling.(we are lazy)
good that u have added original screenshots of your product, good for giving a quick look what u have inside.
those animation shift in "At a glance" section are irritating. Also, on hover, the content disappears too quickly, let users hover and stay on an item to actually read and absorb what’s there.
if you have got some users, collect some testimonials and add them......
The footer CTA feels kind of weak. Make it more specific and benefit-driven.
Hope it helps..
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